Mimosa Flow...

[Mercury]

*I'ma start up something....what I'ma do is AUDIO...TEXT...THEN STORY BEHIND the flow. Yall should do your own threads like this too*

http://www.zshare.net/audio/812997259d2ca0f5/ (Audio)

I wake up, half hung over/
next to this broad, when she come over?/
must won't sober...looked at my gear/
nike shorts, polo shirts, smellin like beer/
one loafer, 2 socks, feelin' like 2Pac/
I get around, mad sick, need a flu shot/
she got a tube top, with one breast out/
other one concealed, it must feel left out/
I'm just 'bout awake, plottin on my next move/
new outfit on the rack, yo, lets grove/
homegirl, you gotta go, I'm about to jet, too/
first, take a shower and get flyer than Jet Blue/
lets do...this again, girl, whats ya name again?/
you can be on my team, babygirl, I play to win/
pancakes, bacon, bread out the toaster/
Finished my breakfast, with a Mimosa

This that Mimosa flow...

story out the way, its time to flex now/
you was the past king, i want the next crown/
I'm the best 'round, you should google me/
I heard they put the tech 'round where ya noodle be/
thats lunacy, you should stay humble/
cause if you act too flashy then they want you/
thats why i show love, they show love back/
I don't gotta perpetrate with a rough rap/
when I bust that...I spit my lifestyle/
like how can I be fresh...right now/
my flow is like a pill...bite down/
I'm killin competition, I don't fight now/
get off the mic, clown...and find a day job/
i'm tryna get you out the geto, boy...facemob/
we wanna be rich, they can toast us/
wake up in the morning, drink mimosa's

(STORY)
Basically I'm doing a mixtape called Hollywood, Virginia. Kinda like a night life type of CD with laid back beats. I didn't intend for the 1st verse to be a story...but after the 1st 2 bars I just kept going til I had a 16. I didn't wanna make the whole song a story...sometimes Ghostface and Raekwon will tell a one verse story then rap about something different in the next verse...so I kinda went that route. The first verse story is semi true...it didn't happen all at one time, I took bits and pieces of stuff that happened at different times and made it into one story. Sometimes if I have an extended period of time off like i do this week, I might treat myself to a light morning alcoholic beverage, such as a mimosa.

[Gifted]

I know this got views and no comments. I'm peeping it on the phone so I was gonna wait til i got home to check the audio....but text/concept wise this is nice....

[T-MADDY]

I was in here earlier but z-share dont stream on my computer for some reason, I went to download it but forgot about it when I was waiting out the wait time. I'll check it now though.

[T-MADDY]

this was better than I thought. I thought it would have been boring, not cause of the emcee, but the concept. ironically, I preferred the story to the verse, the content was a lil better plus I thought it suited the beat, still good all around.

would check for mixtape.

[Mercury]

thanks for checking...

[T-MADDY]

whats the software you record with?

[Mercury]

I used cool edit for the actual software. Not the adobe acrobat update (because i have that too) but the original cool edit from the 90s lol

Its not coming across like it because of my lack of mixing ability but I actually got a nice lil set up externally. I got a Xenyx502 mixer and an AKG Perception 100 mic. It comes across OKAY but when Stress/Defakto come here and record, and they mix it down....their stuff comes out crystal clear.

[Tully Blanchard]

This was cool Merc. I don't know why, but when I first started reading the verse I thought that Slim's So Fly was gonna be the instrumental.

[King Zen]

wEaK!

I can say more but why?

I've said enuff. :cool:

[Jack Skellington]

you kinda sound like Skillz vocal wise... kinda overpowered the beat but for the topic you did your thing..

[Varcity]

gud choice of beat..was feelin the story line and wordplay was on point..painted a gud setting in the beginning gud shit