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Plain Ole Me
11-05-2010, 12:08 PM
Mozart of these dope psalms with quotes long as both arms of Voltron
Flows spawned will cut ya green off like mowed lawns; the most on, u at most? Pawns
Rooks’ aint touchin the King, bypass moats, alarms, intruder alert’s and boat’s swarm
foe’s warm; I’m Hotter then broke mom’s in Kohl’s shops, coats on and the clerk’s gone!
rhymes hard to swallow, you choke on bars I wouldn’t even make a toast on
they lack drive, my M.O.’s like I left the coast on, that’s why I’m so calm
but to you my sole qualm's SOCOM.. think I pulled a homi on his fam, he's pissed
You can have Bron's brawn still getcha hami's pinched, end up on Miami's bench
asked fans, by show of hands, he's sick? now he’s pullin KanYe-Grammy's fits
4 1, I roast punchlines, Andy Dick, body ya startin 5 and deep 6
chocolates; bar sweet as an Andes Mint, negro you blacken whites, Andy Griff
Rain on my parade, I Mayweather hits, Street fighters on pause seein me like Cammy's tits
They cant sleep on em minus Ambien, so excuse the ambiguity in his ambience
..no matter where you sit, word is.. ima good look like an ambigram
some say im soft cause cuz I ain’t cussin like my anty’s fam
guess im they antonym.. u anti him? up the ante then..
I ant-eat em n anybody buggin, but butt-ins start bluffin when i bust buttons
warm the oven, watch chickens with no bones to pick, burn, tough nuggets
Careless if you buff brother, you cant touch this, please I hammer MCs,
your bars a grammar disease, Im like geez who's light standards are these?
stammer stanzas, Costanzas steez, you and best in the same sentence, thats slander to me
Killer emcee? please! time he's put in behind bars shorter then TI's pleas

Jack Skellington
01-14-2011, 04:02 AM
I thought i replied to this the first time I read it, my bad. Some lines felt a lil forced but other than those minor hiccups, a dope read.

Plain Ole Me
01-16-2011, 04:22 PM
word, im tryna work on making smoother reads and not forcing my flow what parts were forced in your opinion?

bobbymcveezy
02-17-2011, 03:24 PM
Damn How nobody reply to this!!? That Whole thing was nice, Real sick, had me anticipatin every bar, good shit, and man nuthin was forced to me dude that shit went together damn near perfectly........

Mr.T
05-02-2011, 08:15 PM
I liked it off a first read...but I'mma read it again to see what Jack is gettin at